Mystique

July 24, 2008 at 11:39 am (Gemma Wiseman's pics, Gemma Wiseman's poetry, Poetry, haiku) (, , , , )


Pic by Gemma Wiseman ~ Mystic loneliness
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Lonely
Misted landscapes mean lonely
Lonely silences
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Naked
Naked trees in grey swirlings
Naked agonies
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Secrets
Secret longings in mornings
Secret, pale mystique
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2 Comments

  1. whypaisley said,

    July 24, 2008 at 12:35 pm

    funny,, i see peace and tranquility,, not loneliness at all…..

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  2. rio said,

    July 24, 2008 at 12:55 pm

    I think whypaisley’s comment before me is funny. It’s a response to the mood of the poem and its dominance. It insists on its melancholy embrace, with or without consent. Truthfully, I think that that is often how we experience emotions.

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